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Sharron Bassano's avatar

"Some cops didn’t work well in the dark." "Jimmy said halt and Darrell said okay."

"The crowd said thanks for letting us live another moment...". "Darrell said bye for now and Jimmy Book said see you."

Ah, Victor. Your magic is in truncated, plain-spoken lines, like these. This story could be titled Futility. What the fuck is wrong with humanity anyway? If I could be of any other sentient species, I would take my chances. Beautiful piece.

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Jim Cummings's avatar

Urban chaos and corruption, wounded souls, the inconvenient rabble.

"Jimmy said halt and Darrell said okay, but the crowd that came from the shadows grumbled."

"Most just paid their tributes at the liquor store."

So much tension here, yet I find a smile line here and there and maybe a little hope in the interaction of Jimmy and Darrell. Gonna read this one again, as usual. Crazy good Victor.

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