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Peak Victor work here. The anti-Inception, an actual architecture of dreams.

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Thank you, Dane. It was fun, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. Anti-inception.. I'll have to remember that one!

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Whoa, that hit me like a cable snapping off. Something massive was collapsing, it must have been my comprehension. Well done, Victor!

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Yes, mine too. I don't always consciously know what I'm doing. Sometimes, it's seems to be moving across the keyboard like a Oujia board. Oops, I dated myself with that ref, for sure. Thanks for checking it out, Zoe!

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This is remarkable, Victor. I feel like I just had a tour through a schizophrenic mind. A sympathetic treatment of a man on the edge. So many creative images here.

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Thank you Jim for checking it out, and glad you enjoyed it, friend.

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This is such a beautiful story, Victor. A quiet reflection on aspects of the human condition that we don't talk about much. Thank you for having been inspired, and for sharing it, and for not selling it in the supermarkets.

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Thanks Mike. Glad you enjoyed it, and you know I pretty much talk about anything if the fancy hits me...:) And okay on the supermarkets....

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"another one of the cables that connected his rational thoughts frayed"........"the world smothered itself silent" ..............What do we do? asked Jacob. We go on, she said." Beautiful stuff, Victor. I am always inspired.

About voice overs: If you have trouble recording, switch browsers temporarily. I couldn't record on Firefox, but when I switched to Safari, it worked perfectly. Worth a try?

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Thanks for reading, and the lovely comment, Sharron. And the tech tip! Sometimes that stuff drives me crazy, but I'll will indeed try again....

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Let me know if using a different browser works for you. Firefox is my default browser, but for some reason it could not access my microphone. Demons...

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