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Mark Starlin's avatar

I loved this one. I am at the age where I totally get the reaction of the customers. 🤣

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Victor D. Sandiego's avatar

Thanks Mark. I'm glad you liked it. I too am at that age.. :)

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Meg Oolders's avatar

I'm very fond of the way you cared for Baz in this story.

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Victor D. Sandiego's avatar

Thank you Meg. Baz is a good kid and I think he learned his lesson.. :)

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Tom Pendergast's avatar

Hey, that was a lot of fun ...

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Victor D. Sandiego's avatar

Thank you Tom. This is the 3rd time I've written a story about a robbery. Maybe I watch too many movies? The first 2 ended well... differently.

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Victor D. Sandiego's avatar

Yes, wouldn't that be something? I suppose I should file this under flights of fancy :) Many thanks for reading Mitchell, and I'm glad you liked it!

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