Poignant and simply told. The Hemingway-like economy is suited to the child and believable in the context. I feel the close might gain in strength were the brother/flowers/too much happiness deleted from this otherwise well-written piece. Thank you.
Goes to show I don't remember what the welcome email says. Haven't looked at it lately. :) Still, many thanks for finding your way though the Substack metropolis here.!
Thank you, it's like reading 5 stories at once 😊
Thank you Anastasia, I really appreciate your feedback.
Wow. So powerful, Victor!
Thank you Winston. I'm glad you liked it.
WOW
Wondering thoughts lost
One connects to another
Winter’s frosting melts
Thank you Elva. A lovely take!
Poignant and simply told. The Hemingway-like economy is suited to the child and believable in the context. I feel the close might gain in strength were the brother/flowers/too much happiness deleted from this otherwise well-written piece. Thank you.
Thanks for reading and for your comments, Clark. Much appreciated!
Thank you Mitchell. You are a one of kind drilling down to the earliest piece! Glad you liked it and welcome!
Goes to show I don't remember what the welcome email says. Haven't looked at it lately. :) Still, many thanks for finding your way though the Substack metropolis here.!