This story feels very earnest - I read it accompanied by a steady drumbeat of doom, conjured by the words themselves. It is impressive. Wherever the idea came from, you've done it justice (as opposed to the "justice" done in the story itself).
@Victor D. Sandiego Those words that "dropped out of school because they removed the dictionaries" landed helter-skelter on wrinkled ground criss-crossed by rabbit trails that led me home. How? I don't know, but what a ride. gracias.
Good god, Victor. I don't have the words to comment on this piece intelligently. I can only say it fired off every emotion I am capable of.
This story feels very earnest - I read it accompanied by a steady drumbeat of doom, conjured by the words themselves. It is impressive. Wherever the idea came from, you've done it justice (as opposed to the "justice" done in the story itself).
@Victor D. Sandiego Those words that "dropped out of school because they removed the dictionaries" landed helter-skelter on wrinkled ground criss-crossed by rabbit trails that led me home. How? I don't know, but what a ride. gracias.