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Mike Leavy's avatar

Distilled to perfection, Victor. Not a single wasted syllable. Utterly captivating. Love it!

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Victor D. Sandiego's avatar

Thanks Mike. A bit of an oldie I dusted off. Glad you enjoyed it...

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Jim Cummings's avatar

Fantastic, Victor.

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Victor D. Sandiego's avatar

Thanks Jim, glad you liked this shorty. Appreciate your comment, friend!

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

Wow. Perfection -- words of diamonds and rubies. Takes my breath away, Victor.

"The sun tumbles fast into the sand." "to kneel before the altar and offer loyalty to the invisible are all you need..." "between desert and stars..."

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Victor D. Sandiego's avatar

Diamonds and rubies, you say? Maybe some broken glass mixed in there too :) Thanks Sharron, glad you enjoyed it.

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James Ron's avatar

Such a pleasure to read, Victor!

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Victor D. Sandiego's avatar

All right James! Glad you enjoyed it, a bit from the wayback. Thanks!

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Mónica's avatar

Qué fantástica historia....huele a libertad!! Gracias Víctor, por un instante me sentí copiloto dentro del coche. 😊

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Victor D. Sandiego's avatar

Gracias a ti, Mónica. Y para ser copiloto por un rato, ahora es tu turno manejar, pero en la ciudad, por favor. Y sin Jack.

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Trilety Wade's avatar

" a tiny geyser of glitter in the dark landscape below" Damn!!!

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Victor D. Sandiego's avatar

Thanks Trilety. Glad you liked that little peek from way up high..:)

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