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Thanks for another great story, Victor. There was so much in this one that seemed relatable, it really resonated with me (thematically, not literally as I still have my hands, feet). And congratulations on the book! I look forward to its release.

The billboard is in the works.

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Thanks Mike! For reading and for the billboard :) Book in progress, I'll keep folks up to date as it goes. Good you can relate, I'm guessing that's not universal...

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Wow... I felt identified when sometimes I do not express my ideas because I assume that other people may not agree...I am accepting the mutilation of my tongue...Oh never again.

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Yes indeed, that's one way to (metaphorically) mutilate the tongue. Thanks for reading Mónica and for the insight!

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I am enjoying reading your work and another silver-tongued writer, Mike Levy. No issue with the timing of your response. I often tell myself, "The timing is the timing". I forgot where I stole that from. Did I mention I am a word thief? "All words are borrowed", my writing teacher, Andy Couturier, politely reminds me. I'd argue with him it is how we re-construct words that makes it fun to read. Hollywood (for the most part) likes happy endings. I do not live there. My comment to you was tongue in cheek. So many idioms with the word "tongue". I do not speak in tongues, only Spanish, my native language and English.

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Yes, the timing is the timing and now I'm stealing from you who has forgotten where you stole it and that's just as good as can be. I agree with you on the reconstruction of words, although I understand what Andy C. is saying. I speak Spanish and English, too, although I should probably reverse the order of that phrase since Spanish came second. Also, still learning. Both tongues, I mean. Many thanks Elva!

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Holding my breath, I stayed cheery through the entire story waiting for the sweet metaphor, happy analogy, silver lining, or some calmingly consolation. Still waiting ...

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I'm sorry to have kept you waiting, Eva. Sometimes, it's just the way it goes with me. Not always (should I say rarely??) a happy ending. Many thanks for reading!

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I sure like your stories!

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Thanks much James. Appreciate it!

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Mar 6, 2023
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Nope, me neither and I don't think it's actually coming to this. At least not yet. Thanks for reading!

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Feb 24, 2023
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Thanks Garrett. Work in progress getting it assembled and it's coming along. Thanks for reading!

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Feb 21, 2023
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You're right Edward. He hung in there, actually hadn't consciously thought that. Good observation my friend!

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