Nice study on the futility of retribution. It seems so dystopian, yet we know scenes like this have played out time and again. And it will play out again, because we are, well, human.
I agree with you in the sense that things like this will play out again. Tomorrow less, and the day [week/month] after that less, at least that's my wish. Appreciate your thoughts, Mike. Many thanks.
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Nice study on the futility of retribution. It seems so dystopian, yet we know scenes like this have played out time and again. And it will play out again, because we are, well, human.
I agree with you in the sense that things like this will play out again. Tomorrow less, and the day [week/month] after that less, at least that's my wish. Appreciate your thoughts, Mike. Many thanks.
Wow, Victor! This is so powerful and searing. One of your best pieces I've read so far!
I'm glad you enjoyed it, Sarah, and many thanks for your comment!
@victor d. sandiego Whew ... you had me fixed in that place, a place where I didn't want to be but couldn't leave until the final word.
Among so many stone-etched images, one line remains:
"Not lost, he said. Taken."
Thank you Joyce. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Much appreciated that you hung in there to the end. I know it's not my happiest piece.
Not all pieces can be happy. This was powerful, moving, and memorable.
I echo this sentiment, Victor. Gut wrenching, beautifully written.
Thank you Safar for reading and your lovely comment.