This new era makes me old, my brother Khalid says. I had a nimble sense of grace and now my chest feels boulder weight. It’s as if the world collapsed on its side and we are lying down when we should be standing.
Victor there are so many beautiful lines and phrasings, I feel like I want to read this over and over again simply to sit with some of them! It is nearly poetic.
Thanks so much for participating in our prompt celebration.
This reads very heavily--you really have a powerful writing voice. There is an artfulness to your prose that I really appreciate. Beautiful piece!
Victor there are so many beautiful lines and phrasings, I feel like I want to read this over and over again simply to sit with some of them! It is nearly poetic.
Thanks so much for participating in our prompt celebration.