Multilayered human potential which recognizes the window that opens the heart which opens another heart inside the first which opens another inside the second, and so on...
Some curious, gorgeous lines here, Victor.
"...whispered into his own ear..."
"...laid down next to river, and cried."
"The day ripened the city..."
"None of this is true. None of this is false, either."
"...And so on, story within story, love within love, year within year..."
petalous! ( thanks for the new addition to my vocabulary)
Thanks Sharron! MS Word complained at me about petalous, but I told it to keep quiet :) Glad you enjoyed it!
What a twisty ride through reflection! I’m simultaneously awed and coughing up embarrassment for how much of myself I saw in this piece.
Yes, Nicole. A twisty one, indeed :) I too see myself there, can’t help it I suppose. Thanks for reading and dropping a comment. Much appreciated!
Wonderful prose Victor. I will take some time to reflect.
Good one, Jim. We shall reflect. Thanks for checking it out and commenting!
Your words are like a balm on my brain. So glad I found you
Thank you, Kaimi. Glad you enjoyed some of these pieces, and I appreciate your kind words. Welcome!
Hola Víctor una maravillosa historia. Sobre tu pregunta de sugerir algo...que te parece "café" Gracias!
Un grano de café que queria estar adentro de una olla con otros granos... algo asi.... :)
Another incredible story or mirror, and my reflection.
Alright David! Thanks! We better keep reflecting...
Thank you, Igga. I hope home is a good place to be. I know I like it (although road trips are great, too.. bring the good stuff:)
Some curious, gorgeous lines here, Victor.
"...whispered into his own ear..."
"...laid down next to river, and cried."
"The day ripened the city..."
"None of this is true. None of this is false, either."
"...And so on, story within story, love within love, year within year..."
petalous! ( thanks for the new addition to my vocabulary)
Thanks Sharron! MS Word complained at me about petalous, but I told it to keep quiet :) Glad you enjoyed it!
What a twisty ride through reflection! I’m simultaneously awed and coughing up embarrassment for how much of myself I saw in this piece.
Yes, Nicole. A twisty one, indeed :) I too see myself there, can’t help it I suppose. Thanks for reading and dropping a comment. Much appreciated!
Wonderful prose Victor. I will take some time to reflect.
Good one, Jim. We shall reflect. Thanks for checking it out and commenting!
Your words are like a balm on my brain. So glad I found you
Thank you, Kaimi. Glad you enjoyed some of these pieces, and I appreciate your kind words. Welcome!
Hola Víctor una maravillosa historia. Sobre tu pregunta de sugerir algo...que te parece "café" Gracias!
Un grano de café que queria estar adentro de una olla con otros granos... algo asi.... :)
Another incredible story or mirror, and my reflection.
Alright David! Thanks! We better keep reflecting...
Thank you, Igga. I hope home is a good place to be. I know I like it (although road trips are great, too.. bring the good stuff:)