Walking in the desert, he arrived at a rope. It was thick, woven of coarse fibers – and hung from the sky as if by an invisible hook. The air was clear, not a single cloud, and although he raised his head...
"I think I'll give it a tug." Great line to make me curious. I liked the mysterious repercussions and how different interpretations are there, like in a dream. It has a quality of a dream where I'm missing one piece.
Loved this. So poetic and evocative. Zen-like in its combination of simplicity and depth. Thanks for another great story, Victor. It is short, but durable!
The Invisible Connections Of Space And Time
"I think I'll give it a tug." Great line to make me curious. I liked the mysterious repercussions and how different interpretations are there, like in a dream. It has a quality of a dream where I'm missing one piece.
Que hermoso! Ver el hilo de la vida y aferrarse a él.
Loved this. So poetic and evocative. Zen-like in its combination of simplicity and depth. Thanks for another great story, Victor. It is short, but durable!