Walking in the desert, he arrived at a rope. It was thick, woven of coarse fibers – and hung from the sky as if by an invisible hook. The air was clear, not a single cloud, and although he raised his head...
"I think I'll give it a tug." Great line to make me curious. I liked the mysterious repercussions and how different interpretations are there, like in a dream. It has a quality of a dream where I'm missing one piece.
Thank you Andrew for reading and your thoughtful comment. I hope that filling in the missing piece is part of the fun, and the curiosity. Such are the invisible connections I suppose. All the best to you.
Loved this. So poetic and evocative. Zen-like in its combination of simplicity and depth. Thanks for another great story, Victor. It is short, but durable!
"I think I'll give it a tug." Great line to make me curious. I liked the mysterious repercussions and how different interpretations are there, like in a dream. It has a quality of a dream where I'm missing one piece.
Thank you Andrew for reading and your thoughtful comment. I hope that filling in the missing piece is part of the fun, and the curiosity. Such are the invisible connections I suppose. All the best to you.
Que hermoso! Ver el hilo de la vida y aferrarse a él.
Buena idea. ¡Tomemos el hilo de la vida y aguantemos! Gracias Mónica!
Loved this. So poetic and evocative. Zen-like in its combination of simplicity and depth. Thanks for another great story, Victor. It is short, but durable!
Thank you Mike. Durable Zen sounds like a title I may have to explore :) Appreciate your comments brother!